Bird-of-Summer
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I know are days are numbered early bird of the summer, you'll fly south just as the fall begins
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Feb 9, 2011 14:31:04 GMT -7
Post by Bird-of-Summer on Feb 9, 2011 14:31:04 GMT -7
 If you haven't noticed I put all my work in this folder hehe..... not in its rightful category. its just a poem i worked on.... Colorado, I’ve Met You Colorado, I’ve met you, twice. Once in the chivalrous mountains, palms pressed to the shoreline of the skies, with annually blooming chiming bells at your feet, once in the city where the sun shimmered over a bustling setting only to fall brilliant and introverted when the moon made its entrance.
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Feb 10, 2011 13:55:52 GMT -7
Post by ink on Feb 10, 2011 13:55:52 GMT -7
... You do realize there IS a section for poetry, and that this is role-play, not writing, right?? =/
I'd suggest moving it so people can find it easier. *shrugs*
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Feb 10, 2011 14:15:39 GMT -7
Post by YukiTen on Feb 10, 2011 14:15:39 GMT -7
Hmms. I agree with INK
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Bird-of-Summer
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I know are days are numbered early bird of the summer, you'll fly south just as the fall begins
Posts: 30
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Poem
Feb 10, 2011 14:27:35 GMT -7
Post by Bird-of-Summer on Feb 10, 2011 14:27:35 GMT -7
i dunno.. i like this folder
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Bird-of-Summer
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I know are days are numbered early bird of the summer, you'll fly south just as the fall begins
Posts: 30
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Poem
Feb 10, 2011 14:28:16 GMT -7
Post by Bird-of-Summer on Feb 10, 2011 14:28:16 GMT -7
did i hear a " i like your poem!" in there anywhere? NO
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Feb 10, 2011 14:31:18 GMT -7
Post by lyric on Feb 10, 2011 14:31:18 GMT -7
I liked your poem! Lol, And I also think its all cool right where it is. =)
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Bird-of-Summer
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I know are days are numbered early bird of the summer, you'll fly south just as the fall begins
Posts: 30
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Feb 10, 2011 14:31:40 GMT -7
Post by Bird-of-Summer on Feb 10, 2011 14:31:40 GMT -7
merci beacoup!!! THANK. YOU.
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Feb 10, 2011 14:32:12 GMT -7
Post by ink on Feb 10, 2011 14:32:12 GMT -7
Hey, I'm an admin *shrugs* its my job to tell ya bout this type of things. I'll give you a full on critique when you post it in the right place. ^v^
'sides, Birdy, if you don't move or repost it on your own, I will. I'd rather you did, though. =)
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Feb 10, 2011 14:34:35 GMT -7
Post by YukiTen on Feb 10, 2011 14:34:35 GMT -7
Lol. Word up, INK. XD
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Bird-of-Summer
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I know are days are numbered early bird of the summer, you'll fly south just as the fall begins
Posts: 30
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Poem
Feb 11, 2011 14:21:46 GMT -7
Post by Bird-of-Summer on Feb 11, 2011 14:21:46 GMT -7
well i guess your going to have to move all of my writing as of right now bossy boots and not gum giver meanie
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If you haven't noticed I put all my work in this folder hehe..... not in its rightful category. its just a poem i worked on....
